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Review:LaSorelli says:
I have to say, over all, I really liked this chapter.
It's cute and whimsical and quirky and quite unique.
I have to say, though, that Helene (Helen?) and Kimble were portrayed as sounding older... I don't know any eleven year olds who have amazing fashion sense, much less know their whole personality. That was the only part that I didn't really find believable.
Other than that?
Wonderful.

Author's Response: Thankyou! I know it's a bit of an old-ball story, it's nice of you to read with it.

(Sorry about the multiple spellings of Helene, I'm currently in the process of editing this chapter) I know the pair sound a lot older because they're based on my 18yr old friends ^_^ But I'll definitely work on their characterisation now you've pointed that out!

Thankyou so much for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you liked it!

Lv Wizardora


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