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Review:brunettesrule says:
oh, my! *fans self down with hand*... well Remus did get his "something hot", didn't he?! :P

I love it when she's soaked by the rain (as opposed to the kind Remus created... lol jk!)... I got the image PERFECTLY... it's when your that drenched that you literally can't hide anything because the clothes are just STUCK to your body... loved it!

Ooh you did well with your spelling and stuff cos it flows really well - a few minor things I'm sure I'll catch you up on eventually... (Muggle instead of Muggel, croaked instead of crocked etc) We're definitely not the kind of people that consider it more important than the language Kaz, are we?!

And you mirrored her body language beautifully - how she almost withdraws into herself when she thinks he's turning her away, how upbeat and confident she is all the other times... I'm jealous missy!

Anyway, I updated SOM just now, so SOMEONE owes me again... MUAHAHA!!!

Beautiful chappie girl! :)

Author's Response: lol... You're a cheeky bugger.... I know what you were talk about...~ she's soaked~ *Shakes head*

lol, yeah we cant really escape all spelling mistakes in my fics can we :p their like my mark :p heheh lol.

I'm glad you liked, TY for the R7R girl....

Oh and dont worry I'm catching you up... TABAD isn't far away from being updated :D soon you'll owe me hehehehe

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