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Review:Elysium says:
I have to confess I’m rather shocked at this being only the second review for your story – and I am only sorry it has taken me this long to get around to it.

Firstly I want to thank you for this lovely entry, and for having worked so well with the challenge constraints. You have employed some very powerful writing technique in this piece. The repetitious ‘Drip, drip’ is very effective. Especially the way you described it, as though it is the axis on which is world spins, everything is measured by that one constant sound.

Very powerful stuff there. I also think that though the piece is short it is effective, some of the most potent writing is under 1000 words. Nothing will kill a story quicker than waffling on unnecessarily.

Really great work here.

Note: Now in terms of the results of the challenge, I had intended to notify everyone today but unfortunately have just run into a little blip along the way one of the entrants. As such I cannot post the results just now (it will likely be a few more days in which case I shall PM you all) but I did feel it was time to post all of the reviews. The reason for the delay is that I wanted to post all reviews at the same time for fairness really… that and a pinch of procrastination.

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