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Review:Elysium says:
This was really lovely work. I’m just sorry it’s taken so long to get to it! I think you portrayed Ginny’s emotions very well. I’ve always found her to be a character that left me cold – but I really empathised with her in your story… and I place a lot of value in characterisation – so kudos for that.

You are a very strong writer, your turn of expression is clear and there is a lovely fluidity to your work. I think you worked really well within the parameters of the challenge :)

One thing I have to say that I really enjoyed was the symmetry between the mood and the emotion brewing which was reflected in the weather. It’s a simple but very effective way of injecting a strong ambiance within your story.

Note: Now in terms of the results of the challenge, I had intended to notify everyone today but unfortunately have just run into a little blip along the way one of the entrants. As such I cannot post the results just now (it will likely be a few more days in which case I shall PM you all) but I did feel it was time to post all of the reviews. The reason for the delay is that I wanted to post all reviews at the same time for fairness really… that and a pinch of procrastination.

Author's Response: Cool! Thank you so much for all the praise! I don't know even what to do with myself! :] Can't wait to see the results!

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