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Review:dracoslover1 says:
This was such a good chapter! I am an avid Severus/Lily shipper, so I almost thought that this was going to one fo the stories were Severus tries to date someone else to get over her. But it wasn't! You made me believe that this ship could work in real life! (which is hard because like I said, I am an avid Severus/Lily person). I like how at the end how you brought in that Severus still loved Lily.

I like your descripitions in this. The kissing scene that Narcissa and Severus made me think that they could have done more then kiss each other! Your story made me believe that I was actually there!

Overall, this was AMAZINGNESS! I love this chapter. 10/10

PS I love the Dumbledore sayings! Defiantly him!

Author's Response: As you can perhaps tell, I'm pretty committed to the Severus/Lily ship. (But I love Snape and I'm fond of Narcissa, and this combination was available on this collaboration, so I volunteered to deliver some sort of a Severus/Cissy tale.) But there needed to be a special circumstance for either one of them to even entertain an interlude with anyone other than Lily (for Snape) or Lucius (for Narcissa).

I'm glad you liked the kissing scene. Of course, the idea was that they did indeed do a bit more. The criterion of the collaboration required no more than a 15+, so I was about as explicit as I could be before fading to black and leaving the rest to the reader's imagination.

Thank you, thank you for your wonderful response. I am so grateful and appreciative that you took the time to review my story.


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