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Review:Unwritten Curse says:
I. LOVED. THIS. Wow. Haha. Anyway, I've come to leave you that review you requested. (;

I saw the word count and immediately thought I was going to get bored about half way through. My attention span is terrible. But your writing kept me glued to the computer screen. Wow. You pulled me in and I just couldn't look away. I love it when an author can take me into the world along with them. This was just so beautifully written. (:

I wasn't too sure about the pairing either, but you pulled it off. Narcissa was alone and vulnerable, whereas Snape felt a duty to her after making the Unbreakable Vow. But, of course, the ending reminded us that Snape was loyal to no one but Lily. Might I add that the ending brought tears to my eyes. It was beautifully written, and just perfect altogether. Very emotional.

However, I was a bit confused about why Sirius was so keen on making sure James never cheated on Lily. James loved Lily, why would he need to make an Unbreakable Vow? And Sirius seemed a little too harsh with his best friend. I dunno. Maybe I just read it the wrong way. Heh.

Overall, this was wonderful. I loved how you told the story, and it was nice seeing the series of events through the eyes of several different characters. Oh, before I forget, the way you portrayed Dumbledore was PERFECT! I found myself giggling several times at the silly things he said, but also nodding in appreciation at the very heartfelt reccomendations he made to Snape. (; I just love Dumbledore, haha.

10/10 for this, you don't deserve anything less. (: Bravo.

Author's Response: I. Am. Blushing.

Ah, Sirius. That little scamp. Because my response has the potential for being a spoiler, I will PM it to you.

The pairing was close to being random. This is the All Ship Collaboration, after all. I’m quite fond of those two characters, although not necessarily together; so I signed up to write a story for this “ship.” And this is what I came up with. I felt with such dark and complex characters, any relationship would not run a straight line.

I am truly delighted that you liked the story and the way the different characters were presented. (A couple more ended up on the cutting room floor, so to speak.)

Thank you so much for taking the time to review and for your very kind words.


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