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Review:Tomboy54 says:
I will try my best to remember what I wrote the first time for this chapter, ok?

AWSOME CHAPTER, BUT IT WAS SAD! I feel terrible for Alyssa. That just stinks what happened. He gets together with Alyssa then he is just dead. Darn. This is really going to make her teen years and the rest of her life really stink. I really hope that kind of thing never happens to you, me, Kaitlynn, or Justin.

I am glad that she ended up with Fred. I'm not saying I prefere Fred over David cause I'm not! I'm just glad it wasn't Dynamite. He seemed like an ok guy sometimes, but he proved he can get a bit out of control (I'm talking about when he knocked out David). It just would have seemed wrong if it were Dynamite. Since she couldn't marry David due to the 'circumstances', Fred was my second choice for her.

I must say this was sad. I kind of figured it was going to a bit sad since the way the last chapter ended. I didn't cry, but those last couple of paragraphs made my eyes a bit fuzzy, but I'm alright. It must of been pretty hard for you to kill him like that. Wasn't the whole reason you started this story in the first place was because you didn't want to let go of Love and War? Now this one is over. This stinks. Anywho, it was a good chapter and story over all. This and Finding Happiness are my two favorite stories out of every single story I have read on this site, and I'm not just saying that.

I would say 'update soon, please!', but I can't so I am looking forward to updates on anything or possibly any new stories.
1110/10!!

Author's Response: Okay.

I'm glad you liked it! It really sucked for Alyssa. Her life does suck until she starts going out with Fred. I know, I couldn't stand it if it happened to you, me, Kaitlynn, or Justin.

I'm glad she's with Fred, too. David was a better match for her, but he's gone so Fred's the next best thing. If she was with Dynamite it would've sucked big time. He seemed ok, but when the whole alyssa thing came into play he began to show his true colors. Dynamite ruined his chances, though.

It was sad, and I cryed when I wrote it. Due to what happened in the last chapter though it wasn't unanticipated, though. I'm sorry. It was hard it really was. I know this story came out of my inablility to let go of Love and War, and now I'm really done. I'm glad that two of my story's are your favorites, it gives me that warm fuzzy feeling inside! Ha!

I just put on a new next generation. Titanic!


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