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Review:chiQs09 says:
Oops, I accidentally reviewed the wrong one-shot! Sorry, when started reading the prologue, I didn't notice that this is a collection of one-shots because I missed reading the Author's Note...

OK, this story just didn't get me in, but not because of your writing style. Your writing style and descriptions was excellent! I just don't like Snape very much. For me he should always love Lily from the distance... And not fall for some other woman, like Narcissa, who's already married.

I like Narcissa's character here. She's so real, fearing to ruin her marriage with Lucius. I like the - can I say "happy"? - memories that flooded her mind when she remembered giving birth to Draco and then marrying Lucius. And all that that follows in her life...

I think the end was a bit sad. Even though I don't like Snape so much, I have compassion for him. James and Sirius should grow up! ^_^

Author's Response: I have no problem with your not liking Snape, and I appreciate that you were willing to read the story anyway.
As for your statement,
"For me he should always love Lily from the distance... And not fall for some other woman, like Narcissa, who's already married"
-- I actually feel very much the same. (That's why I find it extremely difficult to read Snape/OC, no matter how well-written.) But since I'd signed up to write a Snape/Narcissa story, this is what I delivered.

So, thank you so much for reviewing this story. I appreciate it enormously.
PS: And thank you doubly for reviewing the other stories in this collaboration. Even if it started out as an accident, it was a fortunate accident.


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