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Review:chiQs09 says:
OK, I just realized that the next-gen one-shot was already up. The concept of the story was a bit clichéd, in my opinion. I mean just because Teddy didn't receive a response from Victoire when he told her he loved her, he was all upset and didn't even send her owls all month? What kind of Bf is that? :) Yes, of course returning an "I love you, too" is hard, but pushing someone to say it? I mean, he sort of 'pushed' her to say it, right? Because he didn't send her owls all the time or was ignoring her. So Vicky had no other choice to say it back to him...

There were also a few dialogue errors... aside from that, the story was lovely.

^_^ Let me know if a Scorose story is up.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave me a review!

What I was trying to show with this story is just how confusing love can really be. They noth were confused with what to do with their feelings, and it all sort of lead to a loack of communication, which really messed everything up. Nether of them thought the other one wanted to talk about it, so it just sort of hung in the air for a while... I didn't want it to seem as if she was pushed to say it, I think she was just caught off guard and once she had been without Teddy for long enough, she put the pieces together as well as her feelings. Absence makes the heart grow fonder :]

I'm really glad you liked it despite the cliche-ness. Thanks again for leaving me a review!

~emily~


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