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Review:Bella_Portia says:
The opening scene at the lake, between the two girls, was very effective and sweet. The dialogue was good, and the relationship between the two cousins came through. It was a nice set-up with little Rose helping out her older cousin.

I liked, also, the way you used little James in the scene on the train as a device to interrupt the romantic interlude and perhaps make Victoire overly nervous, so she lost her bearings completely when Teddy said, "I love you."

The walking to the Shrieking Shack, through the tunnel -- I liked those details. And the final resolution was really nice.
This was an excellent example of what this collaboration is supposed to be.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.

I'm really glad you liked the opening, and I really appreciate all of the positive comments.

I'm so happy that you liked the part with James! I wanted to add that part because it fits so well with canon and with my story. And you are exactly right about James making Victoire overly nervous :]

Your last comment really rendered me speechles, and I appreciate your review so much! Thanks agan ^_^

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