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Review:Chelly says:
This is just such a great story! There's only one little thing I would suggest, and that would be to add a bit of the transition between the first chapter and this one, because it would make the story flow a little better. Other than that, it's really good.

Author's Response: Thank you for your candor. I'll look at the two chapters again and try to fix that transition thing so it isn't so abrupt. Thanks too for the review.

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