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Review:cosmopiltan411 says:
Hi, this is cosmo form the review corner, I am so sorry for the late review!

1. ugh I’ve never read a collaboration before (much less a NMSS fic—looking forward to this, something new is always fun lol)
2. that’s an amazing first line, there’s something very alluring about it that immediately draws in the readers attention—great job there
3. it took teen days to come up with a proper reply—well at least you managed to portray how calculated she is while adding a little bit of comedic relief there lol
4. love the bar keepers description of her lol—also great job with that portion, most times when someone recounts a story I either feel overwhelmed or as if something’s missing- detail wise- this, surprisingly enough, had the perfect medium
5. I think that the scene where she kisses him was perfect—even though you didn’t really say why he couldn’t make himself go, it’s one of those thigns that can be explained… and I think that you depicted that point perfects (did that make any sense, I doubt it lol)
6. wow—idk what to make oof that last scene… it was just WOW… damn! lol…

Author's Response: Hello there, Cosmo. Thank you for reviewing.
1. I've never participated in a collaboration before. Since you know we're here, I hope you'll take a look at some of the other stories. There are some fine ones posted and many others upcoming.
2. Thank you.
3. There was a very popular dating book a few years ago (and the name escapes me) that encouraged women to play very hard to get -- not return phone calls, stuff like that. I think it may have been in the back of my mind. I love that you noticed that scene.
4. I owe a lot to my marvelous Beta (a Brit, thank heaven) for helping me with the dialect. And for a lot of other things.
5. You are right that I did leave some things unsaid. The terms of the collaboration required a 15+, so that was a consideration; but I also preferred to leave some things to the imagination (or to be resolved later).
6. I hope you liked the last scene. Wow is usually a good sign.

Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I very much appreciate all of your comments.


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