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Review:Kahlan says:
Oh, wow. I'm entire sure how to phrase this, because really; this is wonderful.

What makes a good story to me is the characters. And yours were some of the best I've read. They corresponded so well with canon, and I especially liked Snape. He really is one of the best characters in the books. A deeper fictional personality you'd have to search long and hard for, I think.

You've really done him justice.

Also, I loved seing the interaction between Dumbledore and Snape that year. We don't see anything of it in the books, but I really enojyed reading it here. I imagine it must have gone down a bit like that. Dumbledore was fabulously in character as well.

The ending was an amazing twist. Not to mention a very good explanation to his mysterious death.

Oh, this made me all fuzzy inside! 10/10, definitely.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

I'm glad you liked the characters. If they conformed to canon, I owe a lot to my brilliant beta for keeping me on track.

I agree with you on Snape. He is a rich character. (I think JKR called him a "gift of a character," if I got that quote right, and he surely is.) I did my best to do him justice, and I'm thrilled if you think I had some success.

I agree that we don't see nearly enough of the interaction between Dumbledore and Snape in the books. I found Dumbledore pretty hard to write, especially considering the subject matter.

Thank you for reviewing. I'm so glad you liked the story.


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