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Review:Ydnas Odell says:
This is DA Jones and this is the review you requested in my thread. I go by a different name on the forum.

Wow! Is all I can say. This is the best fic I've seen in a long time and I read a lot of fics. I'm a big sucker for Draco/Luna or really any Luna fic though, so there might be some bias.

I think you did Luna very well. That line in which she introduced herself to Draco and the crack about Luna not being well-known. And this wreck of a Draco is truly well done.

I choose to believe that in the future of your story Luna eventually cures him and then once Draco is back to himself, he dumps her for the more suitable bride Asteria. Partially because he can't stand that she's Potters friend. But somehow Luna isn't bitter about it.

The language is very evocative and lurid here and it is executed perfectly. I can find nada to criticize.

So a ten and also added to my favorites. I hope you set other pieces inthe world of this fic.

DA Jones

Author's Response: No, no, no... no dumping for Asteria. ^_^ My canon ends to the books and that's why I chose Luna... blond hair. ^_^

This story was so eager to get out. I've never felt like that when writing a story, not the same way. It's just wonderful to hear that others have liked it, that it has made a difference. ^_^ Thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm actually beaming here because you couldn't find any mistakes. Yay for that!! What a wonderful gift to receive.

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