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Review:Jessi_Rose says:
You, my dear, have such a real grasp on the characters that you write that it's frightening. Frightening in such a good way, though. I mean, your dialogue between Draco and Blaise wasn't just believable, it was feelable (oh yeah, I get to make up words now!). You don't shy away from showing the emotions in their speech, which is something most authors have problems with - it becomes a necessity rather than an interaction... it usually seems forced. But you've got such an amazing take on the language used - body and speech - that you're able to weave a scene so well that it's palpable.

Not to mention that, regardless if Blaise and Draco got together, the scenes with them together, even just talking, were hot. *grins*

What still amazes me is your ability to write the bittersweet, angsty, dramatic, no-fluffy-bunnies or prancing unicorn romances. They're more real for a reader, especially one that isn't perfect. =P

I'm running out of words here to tell you how much I love this story. *laughs* I'll stop, again, before I go fangirly, but I really want you to know that I adore your stories and your work as an author. Can't wait to choose what I'm reading next!! Til then!!

Author's Response: *Grins more* I seriously loff each and everyone of your reviews.

Putting dialogue into the story is actually hard for me, mainly because I like to write through sheer description, whether its physical or emotional, and because of that, I don't like to break it up with dialogue. Thus, I like to throw in one piece of speech, and then write about five paragraphs of description to accompany it. Also, I am very against the word 'said' so I end up varying how I describe my character's moments of speech.

*Grins still more* I have a thing against fluffy bunnies and prancing unicorns. If it's not intended to be a humor/satire fic, I won't write them :P Well, I used too, but not anymore.

And yes, Draco and Blaise are very hot. *Drools slightly*

I think I just wrote a response longer then the review itself :P


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