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Review:Tomboy54 says:
GREAT CHAP BUT I AM SAD!!! This chapter seemed like a fast pase one, well, at least faster then the last one. I was right about the crash thing though. Jeez, the battle and everything happened so quickly. I can't believe it is already over. I am glad though that David got to talk (and more) to Alyssa before David... (pause) the thing that happened at the end. I don't have much to say. I think we talked about this chapter for a while already, so. (another pause)


He finally kissed her, and he dies! I must say, that is going to make being a teenager for her alot harder then it already was. And it is going to stay being hard for her her entire life! Shoot! I really hope that doesn't happen to me or you. I would feel almost just as bad myself if that happened to you instead of me. Remember that problem I have of putting my self in other people's shoes? That problem wouldn't help in that situation. Lets just hope it doesn't happen to you, me, Kaitlynn, or Justin. Anyway I should stop talking about that before I get too upset.

Well, since I know there is another chapter..

Update soon, please!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm sorry about that! Is fast pase a bad thing? I'm just so bad at writing that battle because I'd feel like I had to put down who was dueling who and I would feel like it was draging on and on.


I'm sorry, but I've been planning that scene for forever and you know it! Alyssa's life is going to be much more difficult then most teenage girls and it sucks. I really don't want that to happen to us. Yeah, and when people die in stories I have that problem too. I really really hope that it never happens to me, you, Kaitlynn, or Justin. I would cry my eyes out!

I will!

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