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Review:Tomboy54 says:
GREAT CHAP!! This is kind of weird. When I think about it, alot just happened right there: the wedding, his sister moving out, getting a new brother-in-law, talking to his grandfather, Fred telling him that he is 100% sure Alyssa likes him, and that thing with the crash at the end. The weird thing is, I don't have much to say. I guess it is because I basically told you everything.

Anyway, that crash at the end there, what I am thinking is that that crash is leading to 'the end' (*sniff* *sniff*), am I right??? Anyway, I am basically going to ask I think the same question I asked last chapter, are we going to see Alyssa in the next chapter, or one or so more without her? I would like to add that I have noticed that David talks to Fred alot about girls (meanly mainly Alyssa). I don't know how all guys are like that are in Fred's position, but he is doing a very good job of staying serious, and not making fun of him in the process! Props to Fred and to you for making him like that!! Anyway great chapter. I still have another chapter on this story and Finding Happiness to review.

Update soon, please!!

P.S. Congradulations on becoming a trusted author. I can brag about my best friend on the internet so why not?

Author's Response: Thanks! Was it rushed? If it was was it in a bad way that made it bad? These are the questions that haunt me.

I know, cliff hanger allot of people are probably mad about that. It is leading to that *bursts into uncontrollable sobs*. We will see a little Alyssa in the next chapter, but not much. In the last one we'll see more of her. David has really learned that Fred is a good sorce for girl advice, and Fred is the kind of guy who can stay serious in a conversation like that, which is great. I'm glad you like the way Fred is!

Thanks about the TA thing! I called Justin earlier and literally screamed it into the phone. He said it hurt his ear so I said I was sorry, and I meant it. I just had to yell it.

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