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Review:ElissandrAnne says:
Hi Emilie!

I briefly wondered at the beginning of your story whether your Blaise was (canon)-Black or White. You always refer to his black hair... if you ever wrote that his eyes were blue before this chapter, I'm afraid I didn't remember...

I liked the beginning of this chapter. Poor Mikayla! I bet she had a good fright. And then... I guess that a woman always feels like she is a school girl again when she's close to a man she finds attractive. And Blaise's distraction was very realistic too. Good job!

Mikayla is a good OC, and you created another here - Adrianna. Blaise's mother seems to be an interesting woman, to say the least. I like reading stories about the canon characters, but when an author can created an OC that truly belongs to the Potterverse, I enjoy it even more.

This chapter was really nicely done. :)


Author's Response: You know, I don't think I ever declared Blaise's skin color. I think I left it ambiguous so that it is up to the reader. Although, I might have mentioned an eye color later on. I don't remember. I know that I've always had a hard time envisioning him as a black male, so unless he's declared that way in the story that I'm reading, he's always white. Don't know why.

But, yeah, I think I would be scared spitless if I saw an owl delivering a letter to someone house. Oh and Adrianna! I love her too. Her scenes were amusing for me to write. I based her excitement off of my mother's excitement. Not that she ever did or said those kind of things to me (especially later chapters), but just the level of excitement and how I hear her in my head is so much like my mother.

And I'm so pleased to know that you think I have created not only one, but two, worthwhile OCs. That makes me happy.

Thanks again for the review, Anne.


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