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Review:emerald_nellie says:
I really liked the ending, like the last paragraph. It finished things off nicely. For the second half of this story, I think you could have slowed down a bit. Things happened very fast and it might have been nice to just sit back and take things slow for a moment, take time to get your head around what was happening and where the story was going. Does that make sense? Some just seemed a bit rushed is what I mean.
Hope you get what I'm saying.
Nellie

Author's Response: Oh yes, this story. *grimmaces* It's old and cliched and too fast, just like you said. I totally understand what you're saying because Lily goes from crying to kissing and it's very unrealistic. It's definitely rushed, but like it's still good that you liked the very ending - bit of poeticness coming through there. ;) Thank you very much for taking the time to review. :)

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