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Review:Sandra says:
There's so much I want to say about this chapter. For one there's so much irony! Grindlewald been the most feared Dark Wizard when Voldemort will later become one. Rowle and Kavan supporting the man who Dumbledore felt feelings for and talking to him about it.

Onto Rowle though and Kavan and the group, what a bunch of hypocrites! It's understandable why the Slytherin's would be less than pleased. Kavan and his group is like a tame cat saying cats should not be owned by humans. Ok bad example, but you get what I mean. I have to admit though they made a good point when they said it was better to stay at Hogwarts then have no control in the Muggle world.

I wonder what Dumbledore's going to think of Kavens and the others dissapearances? They're probably going to suspect that they finally left to go to the muggle world. Would the Slytherins be civil to Rowle or just act as they normally acted before?

This was a great fic on Rowle and you wrote it so well. How in the end despite the fact that Kavan and the others were cowards and acted big for nothing, they were not as bad as the Slytherins, and just scared. And also Rowle while very loyal to the cause obviously doesn't have an objection to murder and imposing his beliefs.

Anyway great chapter, i'm really enjoying these one shots, it's a great Collaboration. Voldemort's never appeared so much in fics as he is doing in this one. 6 chapters straight. lol ;)

Author's Response: lol I liked your example and yes I know what you mean. Kavan was all talk really and for the most part the others just went along with it. They didn't think they would have someone like the Dark Lord knocking on their door lol

What would Dumbledore think when they didn't come back? Probably wonder why Thorfinn did lol but I imagine there wouldn't be enough evidence to do anything to him. And would the Slytherins be civil to Rowle? I imagine they would show him a bit more civility just because they are following the same master now, however I think the whole muggleborn stigma would still apply.

Anyways, so glad you liked the chapter and the collab hehe and your right about Voldemort lol :D Hope you enjoy the other stories to come too!


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