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Review:Tomboy54 says:
GREAT CHAP! There wasn't much Alyssa in this one, but how could there be? It wasn't her wedding. Maybe we will see her next chapter? Sorry, I don't have much to say. Alot of this happened in Love and War. Ok, maybe not alot, but some.

I feel pretty bad for David. He is accutually brave and smart enough to try and tell Alyssa he likes her. Most guys I don't think would try as hard as he is, and he still can't get a moment with her. I feel pretty bad for Alyssa, too. She probably knows he was trying to tell her something important, and now has to wait this entire time not knowing what it is. For almost any girl in that kind of situation, it would really suck. Anyway, great chapter.

Update soon, please!!

Author's Response: Thank You! I'm sorry there wasn't much Alyssa in this chapter, but you know it's just the kind of thing where she just wouldn't fit in as well in my opinion. I know allot's like Love and War, so I forgive you.

I know, poor Davey! He's trying so hard to tell her now to make upo for all the time he was to clueless to tell her, but now that he is he keeps on having tons of bad luck which really sucks for him and Alyssa. She does know that whatever it is he keeps trying to tell her, it's really important. It does really suck for her!

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