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Review:beating_faster says:
This was a fun read. James' voice is very real in this, and I love the whole turn around at the end just because of the look he got. You're really good at filling in the spaces...or in other words, setting the scene. The 'flips' were very effective too. There was enough space between each one that they didn't get too annoying. Or would that be the opposite of the effect you were going for since it annoyed James? Hm. Either way, I liked it.

Author's Response: Annoying James is one thing, but annoying the reader wouldn't have made this story turn out as well - like you said, there was just enough space between them. Enough room for James' thoughts to come through and enough time for Lily to actually read all the sonnets on one page.

James' voice in this was hilarious to write - I could almost hear him in my mind, thinking away about Quidditch and Lily, complaining to himself about how woeful his life had become. =D If I ever get inspiration to write something like this again, I most definitely will, just to be able to laugh the whole time that I'm writing.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I've appreciated all your reviews for my stories, and it means a lot. ^_^

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