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Review:Blissbug says:
Okay. Wow. This is excellent writing. I admit, I was totally surprised when Ron stabbed Harry, but it was perfect, that scene would have just kind of fizzled if you ended it any other way, but it didn't. You rocked it!

I don't usually read dark/horror stuff, but when I saw that bit in your siggy, I thought your writing sounded different and interesting. I'm glad I checked it out :)

One little tip: I would have kept the whole of the story in Ron's POV. We've read the books, we've seen the movies, we know how Harry feels. The reason this chapter is refreshing and different is because of the impact from Ron's emotions, the volitile force of what he feels. That impact get's cut when you switched into Harry's POV.

Either way though, damn good bit of writing, I really hope to see more from you!

Author's Response: Lol. Wow. I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for the tip. I'll change it as soon as I can.


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