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Review:Tomboy54 says:
GREAT CHAP! This chapter was a bit more exciting. When I said in my last review that David is stupid for not telling her, well he isn't as stupid apperhently as most. He was at least trying to tell her. Then BAM. Cue Dynamite. He has such good timing. Dynamite is the really stupid one here.

Ok, really quick since I keep on saying people are stupid, I am going to put the guys in order from smartest to dumbest just to clear things things up, ok?
1. Fred
2. David
3. Dynamite
4. Those other guys Dynamite was with after he hit David

Now that we are clear on that, I can't believe David forgot what he was going to say in the hospital wing. Why couldn't Fred have come first, remind him, then Alyssa came in. Well, its your story. By the way, thanks for the cliff hanger even though I am one out of three people (including you) who knows what happens.

(Now I can finally say it) Update soon, please!!
110/10

Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted a more exciteing follow up to that not so exciteing chapter. He's not quite as stupid now that he's at least trying to tell her, he's just having some bad luck. Stupid Dynamite, but on the upside, all of Dynamite's chances with Alyssa are flat out dead!

Thanks for clearing up the stupidity list, but to be honest, I would have put Dynamite #4, and those other guys number three, but that's just me.

David forgetting was one of the things that Dynamite hoped would happen. It does suck that Fred came in second and told him what he was going to tell her after Alyssa had already been there.

By the way, if you're coundting me in thta one of three people thing then (at least in the case of some chapters) you'd be one of four people who've read it, remember.

Now I can finally say this, I will!

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