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Review:inkismyworld says:
Oh gosh, this was beautiful! I loved how you described Minerva's internal struggle and Tom's thirst for power. Also I liked how you emphasized the concept of Tom giving up everything in his want for power and how it leaves him utterly alone in the end.

The love (lust?) scenes were also very powerful, but not in the way that made me cringe away from the screen in embarrassment ( which often tends to happen while reading romance fanfiction.)

The only thing that stood out for CC is that his eyes have always been described as dark instead of green. Or was that added to remind the reader of his Slytherin heritage?

Anyway, it was a great pleasure in reading this as I haven't come across the pairing using this era, the writers ( myself included) usually opting for thier school days instead, it was a nice change of pace in this what I think is a highly neglected ship.


Author's Response: His eyes aren't green? Oh darn, I just looked that up. But it's so cool when he has green eyes! *grumbles about canon* Whatever, what you said sounded good about it connecting him to Slytherin. ;)

Anyways, thank you very much for reviewing this! It means a lot because I think it was you who first sort of brought this ship to HPFF, and it is a fascinating ship. :) I'm glad that the love-ish scenes weren't too disturbing - I was afraid that they were heading towards smut in places, which would have been very disturbing.

It was tempting to write about them in school, but it seemed interesting to try get them together when he applied to Dumbledore for the teaching position. After studying the timelines, it all fit perfectly to capture that moment between them, him already half-way towards becoming the Dark Lord, and she, with more power than a student.

Okay, I'll stop now. :P Thank you again for reviewing and enjoying this story. ^_^

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