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Review:mizpriss says:
This story was... interesting. You have some errors, including continuity. In a couple of the chapters, one being where she has her first date with Zach, you throw in a completely different name. I believe you called Darden Jenni. In the chapter with the break up, Zach is called David. Maybe these were done on purpose, but to me, they made no sense. One last tip: The phase is seeing as, not seen as. Sorry if this isn't a favorite review, I'm just offering helpful hints for future writings.

Author's Response: Ah! I changed Jenni's name to Darden when I edited the fault, and I appreciate you letting me know. Thank you.

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