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Review:kara101 says:
This is Hermione G from the forum review thread. The fight with the sorting hat is so Sirius! Made my laugh. This chapter seemed like it could have actually happened. This bit here:

The memories have lasted ... and so have these teeth marks on my right hand.

Was wonderful! Made me laugh again. I am interested to see where this story shall go. Now on ways which to improve, hm... write more I guess. Again this chapter had lots of dialouge so perhaps a description of the scene and more narration because Sirius is still telling a story.Overall, nice chapter and feel free to post another story and when this updates you may post again.

Keep writing!

Hermione G

Author's Response: Kara thanks so much!! I'm really happy that you liked it! :) :) I know, I picture Sirius as the kind of kid who got into trouble no matter where he went or what he did. That could be how he and James became so famous for becoming troublemakers. :)

Where the story shall go ... I'm not sure actually! It's just a collection of little funny stories and vignettes about the Marauders' school days, I didn't have any real big plans for this one, it was completely for fun. I'm planning on jumping around from year to year, just focusing on certain events that happen.

Thanks for your CC and I will request again when I update! :)

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