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Review:The_Albatross says:
I know you've already acknowledged that the first chapter is a lot like the film, but a promise to be more original isn't quite as good as starting off on an original foot.

The problem is, because Harry Potter and Titanic are such culural phenomenons, you don't want to get sucked into just combining the two without adding your own spin on it. There are so many other things that you can do with the Titanic-- the tragedy of it goes so much further beyond just the fictional story of Jack and Rose.

Of course, I am preaching to the choir, right?

The only other comment that I had was that you might want to watch out for Hermione's character. Sure, she'd be bitter about leaving school to get married, but I don't know if you want to come on so strong, so fast. Because your chapters are very short, everything that you write within them is very important. It's a lot of pressure! Just be careful to balance out description, dialogue, sarcasm etc. When all we hear from Hermione is complaints, it weakens her as a character. She is a go-getter, after all.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll try to work on that.

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