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Review:quidditch77 says:
Cute final line.
This was a great chapter.
Though I'm not going to lie...them kissing right after she'd been vomiting was a little gross. hahah! But I understand that they love each other that much and Seamus was excited that she told him she's pregnant...so I guess that makes it a tad less gross? haha.
This was a good chapter..and while I liked the engagment scene...I couldn't help but not be as excited as I might've if she wasn't already married. I know what her situation was like, that it was the worst of the worst and her husband should go to jail...but I don't like the idea of her being engaged when she's already married. Maybe I'm wrong but that's just how I feel.
I loved these two lines:
(“I can't help it; this is a new thing for me.” “What is?” “Being happy with someone.”)
(The way she was looking at him confused him. She looked astonished at the term of endearment that had been used toward her. )- Those two lines were absolutely amazing..the idea that Noelle has never been treated in such a way, that she's never been that happy, that she's never had so many fear-free moments as with Seamus...its just perfect. You wrote that aspect of this chapter so well.
I can't wait to read more!!
-quidditch77

Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed but she isn't married and never has been. (:

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