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Review:JesseBlack says:
hello! you've written a cute and nice story so far, i hope you don't mind if i make a few suggestions about it :)
first of all it seem a bit out of character for hermione to accept draco's proposal to move in with him and his family and she seems so much vurnerable in your story then in the book, maybe you could give her a bit more determination. i also have a suggestion to make about the twin girls, you could try to develop their personalities more, make them individuals because so far i could only see peaces of Miones' personality.
i hope you we're upset by my review and that you'll keep up the good work! :D

Author's Response: no i wasn't upset at all ! i am so glad that you gave me those suggestions! i wil try to change it a bit though!

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