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Review:Hermionesclass101 says:
Hi, I'm here to review!

First, you asked me if I liked the last lines. I did. I smiled, and I found it a sort of comic relief, even though I'm not sure I should have. ;) It seemed like the type of thing Petunia would say to appease Vernon.

Now, my honest feedback. I liked it, but it could have been better. I say this, because although the description you did have was nice, I'm a fan of stories with lots of description, o don't take it personally. I like the way you describe Harry's apprehension, and the lack of hostility in Petunia's voice. Like you warned me, the grammar was a little off, but I'm sure it'll be better when you run it by your beta. One thing I did notice:

tip toped down - did you perhaps mean tip toed?

Overall 8/10. Though the grammar was off, it definitely had an impact, and I like your reason for Petunia's hate of magic. The picture was a nice touch too. Good job!

~Katie

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your honesty and I'm def (sorry can't spell that word) sending it to my beta :)
~LB


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