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Review:Hermionesclass101 says:
Hi, I'm here to review!

First, your concerns:

Overall flow - It was beautiful. The way you linked each part of the story together smoothed the flow out perfectly. I didn't really even find anythin confusing, like you said we might.

Impact - Well, it definitely left an impact. The emotions and description in the story hightened it, and the way you ended it was just beautiful.

Some good ol' feedback ;) - I loved it. I loved the emotions, and the way you described Rodolphus's reaction to Bella. And the way he KNOWS that she adores the Dark Lord. It was just amazing overall. I did notice a few minor grammar mistakes, though. Just a few places where a semi colon or a period would have worked better than a comma, so not especially important, but it might help if you just reread it. 10/10

~Katie

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