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Review:Hermionesclass101 says:
Wow, this one was quite sad. The way you described the emotions was amazing. I love the description in the 'fight scene' and Bella and Lucius were perfect. I like Regulus's personality; he has become my new favourite character thanks to this story and a few others. I find his story fascinating.

Anyway, you might want to add a bit more in the first few paragraphs, as it was a bit confusing. I wasn't sure if you were referring to Edgar or Lucius when you called him the Dark Lord's most loyal. I also wasn't sure how Edgar and the others were listening in.

Other than that, I loved it. I'm adding this to my favourites, and I am looking forward to the next chapter!

~Katie

Author's Response: Basically Edgar and the Order snick in to spy as was often done in the war but I probably could expand more on that cause people might not think about that as evident from your review hehe

glad everything was good and also glad you liked it enough to add it to your favorites! I am working on the last part now and its about half way done so it should be up soon! :D


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