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Review:Hermionesclass101 says:
This chapter was really interesting. I like how you used the same last name as the kind old man in the first chapter, and know I find myself wondering what the connection between the two Davies's. I like the coldness that Riddle portrays, but I would think him one to play with his victim a bit more, rather than coming out and saying exactly what he planned to do. I like the original spell, and the almost cliffhanger you ended on.

counting the days till -- counting the day's till

ancestor’s had always called -- ancestors had always called

Good job. I look forward to the next chapter. And did I mention I like you chapter names?

~Katie

Author's Response: If you looked under the chapter image you would see a family tree that shows the connection between the two :)

I never pictured Voldemort to "play" with anyone when there was something he really wanted involved. I always pictured him as a "strictly business" kind of person when it came down to it. But thats just a different interpretation of the character I suppose hehe

As for the chapter names, glad you like them hehe the story is meant as not only a show of how the family faired over the generations but Hogwarts as well and the chapter names are to show it going from nothing to a castle :)

thanks for the review and as you said, next chapter! hehe


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