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Review:Hermionesclass101 says:
Hi, I'm here to review!

Okay, I love the beginning. I also love the way you portrayed and described each individual character. I love the way that the orphans share their surnames with characters from Harry's era. Your description is lovely, and I love the way you ended. I adore the way that you described everything as a fairy-tle to her, which is likely. The emotions are portrayed well. A few slight grammatical mistakes, none important enough to mention, and your writing style drew me in quickly. The transition from 'orphan' Annabelle to 'Hogwarts' Annabelle is slightly confusing. Other than that, it was really good.

9/10

~Katie

Author's Response: No mistakes important enough to mention is what I aim for hehe cause nothing will ever be perfect :)

I'll look at the transition part again, I can be a bit hasty with that stuff as I want to get on to the next part cause its running through my head really fast lol but thanks for the review and so glad you thought it was really good :D

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