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Review:SirenaLuna90 says:
No. Your writing is amusing and perfect. ;) There is a little misspellings here and there but that's quite about it.

In the first chapter, you misspelled veela as vela. I'm sure it's a typo, but you catch my drift. Nothing major to not understand the fiction. Overall, I was amused, and understood and felt the love for Teddy Lupin. (Which by the way you made him sound like the type I am completely interested in. ;]) It was interesting how you didn't add he was an "Animagus" like his mother. Perhaps, you don't view him that way, but I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed the fiction and will look for another chapter as it proceeds on.

I loved it! Please continue on, I really enjoy Farla and her "original" ways.

10/10

Author's Response: Aw, thank you for that :) I'll try and go through those spellings . . .

Ah, yeah -- typo. Thanks for informing me, I'll see to getting that changed. You know, I've only read the last book of HP once and I think I must have forgotten the part that said he was like his mother. Whoops!! Oh well, erm, this Teddy is er, different, lol!!

Thanks very much for your awesome critique.

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