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Review:dazedelf says:
I really liked this story. I especially liked this bit:

"I hear that in order for them to choose your house, you have to duel the headmaster." Sirius' voice sparked interest. "I bet I could beat him, even without a wand."

The description you had at the beginning was amazing especially the first bit about his transformation. Definitely well described. Remus' doubt when he was introduced to Sirius, Peter and James, seemed like accurate characterisation to me also.

Im curious to know what (if any) role Fenrir Greyback will play in your story other than the obvious fact he converted Remus. It was different seeing such a humane side of him rather than the vicious interpretation you usually see.

I think this story is definitely worth continuing because you're off to a very good start!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Heh, there's so many people that like that part with Sirius. I don't even remember how I came up with it.

Fenrir will definately have a large part in the story, maybe not a lot at the beginning, but as you see Remus get older you'll see more and more of Fenrir.

Thanks so much for the lovely review! *hugs*

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