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Review:Firefly Phoenix says:
*leapeth upon you* Wibblesmidge! I am very excited about this marvelous fourth chapter of yours... So, here I am again, to bumble my way through yet another review. Brace yourself.


It was, as always, downright scrumptious and I gobbled it all down accordingly. I just love the way you write! Gaaah, there are no words to say what I think about you sometimes. Anyways! This entire story just gives me shivers. However, this chapter was a little... sprawling. It was long, but not in a bad way, because I can understand why it had to be long. Edwin is spilling out his guts (you know, after he's gone and spilled so many others), so he's got a lot to say about everything. It's just hard to process all of that information at once, so I'm reeling afterwards. That, coupled with the fact that Healer Walker is so... I don't know, crazy, it makes it quite the job to actually understand what he's SAYING, or what he may be trying to say, or didn't really say but you think he's saying. I don't know what I'm saying at this point, but what I mean is that it's a lot to take in at once, which may be why I liked the other chapters the most infinitesimal bit more. Just the most infinitesimal bit, mind you, I love them all dearly.


So... um, because I'm still sort of trying to figure out what the heck is driving this man, I don't really have much more to say, other than 'Bravo, my dear!' for finishing up another chapter and bringing such creepy, creepy joy into my life. I do hope this was constructively criticismy enough for you; I tried! I think! *doffs hat and bows out*

Author's Response: *braces self*

Sprawling, yes. Long, yes. In a bad way, probably... Though I'm glad I manage to give you shivers, dear! Tis one of the top goals, you see. I suppose I could attempt to be less... convoluted? Circuitous? Periphrastic? Well, I'll do something to make myself and Walker a bit more understandable. Though I'm afraid he's not going to get any less nuts... Regrettably, I think it's only downhill from here, love. But I shall endeavor to improve in this regard!

Creepy, creepy joy, you say? Sounds delightfully bizarre, much like you. I thank you very much for your constructive criticism and, as I've said, I will do my best to act upon it appropriately!

*waves* Toodle-loo!


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