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Review:Elysium says:
D I am so sorry it's taken me so long to get to your story! In any case I loved this final chapter.

As tragic and wasteful as Anna's death was, it was necessary to cause a huge shift in Regulus - one that would be enough to cause him to do the things he ultimately did.

I love the way you write and am frequently blown away by the fact that you are not a native speaker - it truly doesn't show... you write more flawlessly than most english speakers I know. Your prose is smooth and lyrical, each sentence slips gently into the next.

The way you tackle the pureblood mentalities in each chapter of MMC is beautifully done. Your insights are exact and piercing but not overstated.

Lovely work darling. 10/10 xox

Author's Response: My turn to apoligize Agent, for taking so long to respond to you *looks guilty*

As a whole your reviews truly make me blush; when I first started writing in another language I never dreamed that I'd be one day getting compliments like this.

Building this story was quite interesting process as whole. In a way there are two stories within it, the past and the present. I'm thrilled to hear that even if the 'past' is somewhat more philosophical and abstract, it didn't come across as being overstated. It was, in a sense, the ultimate practice of showing instead of telling and I'm immensly proud on how I managed to write that out.

What it comes to Anna, I knew from the beginning that she was not going to make it in the end. It was something that had to be done, spoiling the pureness of Regulus...

Thank you again for your reviews, they really lighten my day ^^


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