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Review:Elysium says:
Lmao!! Only you would find away to incorporate both wolves and Antonin in a dramione fan fic! :P

The dream sequence was very powerful. His fear and trepidation were clear in the dream - the same fear that we readers felt on his behalf. And yet at the same time you managed to convey it all in this melodically hypnotic sort of prose so indicative of the dream like state. So that although the scene and what was being said by Voldemort (i.e let the wolves have his body) and the violence of that imagery read as though I were viewing it through a watery substance - so that it was distorted and far away. Does that even make sense? I'm babbling.

Needless to say I think you tackled the dream flawlessly.

xox

Author's Response: Yes, that makes a lot of sense. I was trying to incorporate a dreamlike feel...obviously it couldn't be realistic, but yet, it needed something to make it feel real...now I'm babbling as well :P

*Smirks* Of course I had to include the wolves and antonin. Its my anti-plagarism method. I mean, obviously this is my work...who else would have used Dolohov and the wolves? :P

And thanks so much :D


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