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Review:Elysium says:
Tranquility - the perfect title for this chapter... the last scene (of him in the library) was imbued with such a gentle tranquility that I felt almost lulled by it.

I love Draco's discription of her 'simple beauty' and the 'faint charm of her smile'.

Your turn of expression and the simple eloquence of your language in this piece is both soothing and delightful. Were I to read it aloud the words would roll of my tongue so smoothly.

I adore the way you are demonstrating the intrigue between the two, softly and curiously as good intrigue should be depicted.

You capture Draco's inner struggle so well - this swirling vortex of emotion within him.

Loverly - as I have come to expect from you :D

xox Kylie

Author's Response: I love you bammers :D Kes is frolicking around very happily right now :D

And I'm seriously very caught up with Draco's character. I think there is so much that could be done with it, but that JK barely brushed the surface of.

As for the simple beauty, well could you honestly picture hermione looking as hot as a runway model? I thought not :P

Thanks for the review! :D


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