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Review:leaney says:
***Review For Chapter1***


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Wow! I must compliment you for you're use of vocabulary. It's very well developed and used splendidly throughout the chapter. I Love the description you used. I could picture everything perfectly. Im so interested in this story that I hope you continue to write more. I believe it will be definitely a story worth reading.

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Im not sure I have too much advice to give here. You're flow and writing seemed perfectly fine though a teency bit choppy in some areas. Just keep up the good work! i hope to read more of this! please let me know when and if you do decide to post more!!



--Leaney

Author's Response: Aw! Thanks! Your review really inspires me to write more! *hugs*

I'll definately tell you when I post the next chapter!

Thanks so much!

-carran


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