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Review:Padfooty says:
I don't hate you, honestly! I love you!

Seriously, you write the emotions so well, so dramatically and realistic! It delights me to find a story where the author seems so engaged to the descriptions and feelings, it is exactly how I love it!

Your characterisations are just great, I find them so in character, it delights me even more. I would wish the chapters to be a tad longer, but not finding anything special you should change, I will have to come back to that later.

The flow is wonderful, you are taking your time and are not jumping. I find the story highly believable, I wouldn't imagine Ron reacting in any other way, perhaps a bit more angrily, but it is perfect as it is.

Wonderful plot, I'm looking forward to read more!

Yours,
Padfooty

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! ^_^ I'm really glad you like it so much! I try very hard to keep my flow as smooth as possible, so I'm glad it turned out okay! And Ron's reaction came pretty easily. I can imagine him being angry later, but when he found out, I can picture him hurt and slightly vulnerable.

Thanks again!

~Katie


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