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Review:Padfooty says:
So I'm here, at last!

What a brilliant first chapter! I really really liked it, it was so filled with those descriptions and thoughts I completely adore. You write beautifully, describing everything as you go along, but never making it boring to read.

I found that both Hermione and Draco are very well in-character, and I feel like you as an author understands your characters. You understand how they would act and think, and also adding your own twist as you go along.

One thing; when Draco woke up, it was 'streaming sunlight' and he was 'recalling the memories of the night before'. Then, I would assume it to be morning, or at least day, right? But when Hermione goes down to Rosmerta, Rosmerta tells her to go to bed, by this I assumed that it was night. There might be something I have missed, but it was just something I noticed.

Brilliant chapter, you write really well!

Yours,
Padfooty

Author's Response: Thank you for all of your reviews! I'm glad all my description didn't bore you! ^_^

I'm glad you think they're in character; I was really worried that Hermione was OC.

Hmm, I never really noticed that. I just kind of assumed that she was so intoxicated, that she needed a nap to sleep it off. I'll adjust it slightly so that it makes more sense. Thank you for pointing that out!

~Katie


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