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Review:Labby says:
I really like this! I thought the beginning was wonderful, and I especially loved the description of the moon and then Remus and everything that happened in the beginning. I thought your description was wonderful and you set a good start for the story. I definitely think it is an interesting story and that you should continue with it. I certainly want to read more.

I thought the part with Sirius saying that you have to duel that headmaster was really cute. I remember from the first book that everyone was anxious about what they did for the sorting, so I thought that was pretty cute and it sounds just like something that Sirius would say.

I thought the later part of the chapter could have been a little bit stronger though. Maybe a little more detail would have been helpful. Besides that, it's really good and I want to read more! Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I'll be editing the chapter shortly with your suggestion for the ending! *hugs*

Thankies again!

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