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Review:Elysium says:
Sami, Sami, Sami!

That ending was beautiful: The mysterious one that he had noted before, the one with the feeling that, until now, had gone unrecognized by him. Yet today, his mind had linked the expression with the emotion, and he realized that she was watching him with concern... *sigh*

This is truly gorgeous. It is as I said before, soft and lilting as I read it. You characterise Draco so well, and highlight the intrigue between the two.

But as I said it is the last line and her look of concern which capture me the most, because it is so indicative of Hermione to feel that way even for him.

The moment were he was avoiding the mirror because of the way it reflected his inner turmoil and exhaustion was divine.

This is a gem. xox 10/10

Author's Response: Draco might just be my new obsession. He might have had a lot more time in the books, but I don't think his character was really explored by JK, which leaves him placed happily in my firm, batty paws.

I love the mirror idea. It came to me on a momentary whim as I looked into my own mirror lol.

And the ending, yes I love it too :D

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