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Review:Chilee says:
wish it were a tad longer and helped us get to know Peter a lil better.
for example what was the Slytherin incident. I assumed it was an older brother or is it his sister seeing that he's the only son?
and Rabbit poo doest look like a trick a wizard (or witch) would play on another ...
I'm not always this negative, so just consider it constructive criticism ...

Author's Response: Thank you again for such a critical review. I really appreciate these types of reviews as they help me see what I can improve on. :)

The thing with him not being in slytherin...I actually left that out on purpose, hoping that perhaps you could all come to your own conclusions on what it was that Peter had done. Inciednetally, it WAS the rabbit poo thing that made it so that Peter didn't seem as conniving or plotful as he could be, which made it so that the Hat didn't want him placed in Slytherin.

And rabbit poo seemed like a stupid trick to fall for, which was just me poking a bit of fun at Peter.

Again thank you for the review, I'm so glad that you pointed out things that could be clarified. It's really helpful.


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