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Review:Tomboy54 says:
Great chpter. It kind of showed David's life at home. By the way, how long does this take place after they get home for break. David seems really bored if it is the first day or so back at home, but isn't that how we basically all are?

Anyway, I fell a little bad for David for having to deal with his aunt, but at least he got away for a while. Also, I must say that they can hang out at each others' houses like they did and not think about what other people would think or think that it is just awkward (sorry if I spelled that wrong).

I have also done a little random thinking here. You know how people can use floo powder to get to just about anywhere that has a fireplace? Wouldn't that be kind of weird if that was real. People, whether they are your friends or not, could show up at your home basically anytime and do whatever they wanted in your home. If that was real, might as well leave the front door open day and night!

Anyway, when David was desperate at home and wanted to talk and visit Alyssa, how come he didn't want to talk to Natalie? Wasn't she the one he said he had real feelings for and really liked? Hmmm?? So he decided to go visit his friend he was yelling at in previous chapters instead of his "girlfriend"? Guys are just strange.

Anyway, update soon, please!
100/10
P.S. Sorry that I rambeld on and on.

Author's Response: Thanks! I like how it shows his home life too. This chapter starts the day he gets back for break. Yeah, he was basilcally just bored that day, it kind of reminds me of the two of us.

It sucks how he has to deal with his aunt, but it's good he got away. The two have been friends so long that they can hang out eachother's houses without feeling awkward (and if you spelled it wrong so did I)

It would be weird if it was real, but I'm pretty sure every house has it's own spesific name (ex. Shell Cottage, Weedle Beach, The Burrow, etc.) so people have to know a houses name to get in. But it would be kind of like leaveing the door opened.

One reason he didn't visit Natalie was he didn't know where she lived (sad, I know). He was just having a moment where he needed his best friend. He was so desperate to leave he kind of forgot the arguement. Guys are strange, I know.

P.S. I enjoy long reviews, keep it up.

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