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Review:Strawcherry says:
This made me sigh in bliss. I seldom read R/S, because the ship has never really been my cup of tea. I find though that when I do, they're often real jewels. This one was, too.
It was a bit short, but the emotion flowing throughout the fic was very strong. I was especially moved by the present-time snippets. The form of speech you chose for Remus, as if he was talking to Sirius directly in his mind, came out very strong here and added to the power of his feelings. On top of that, it added to the powerful contrast you drew between the present and the past through words and style.
I noticed one little thingy though: the first part was also in the past, right? So just for the right effect, you might want to put that in italics too, to flow with the rest of the past-parts.
For the rest, I think you wrote a wonderful piece! I think I am going to read one of your Draco pieces next. I have never read a Draco romance fic before (I have definitely limited myself...), so that should be exciting, hehe!

Author's Response: Oh, Strawcherry (nice nickname, by the way)... you just managed to make me blush. This has to be one of the best reviews I've received because it's for a story that made me suffer so much. ^_^ I'm glad you found the essence of this story. You understood it the way I meant it to be understood. Thank you. And also, thank you for pointing out the italics. I managed to remove them when I edited the song in the beginning. ^_^ Oh, you'll read more? Can't wait to see what you have to say about some of my other stories. Thank you, dear, and happy holidays. ^_^

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