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Review:Onora says:
I seen this idea used before, but never so well. Description was great; had a little chuckle all the way through.
Liked James little flirtations with Lily, as it really added dimension to the piece.
All really in character, although maybe don't characterize Lily as a complete goody two shoes. Maybe she could have been trying to hide her smile from James. Or something. Don't worry, I'm just being pernickety. :P
Great job hon, just what I needed to bring a smile onto my face. ;)

Author's Response: Haha, I knew that it wasn't an original idea, but I just had to try it! I'm glad that you liked it :)
Haha, I didn't mean to have her come off as a goody two shoes. I just wanted to show that she would do anything to get the Marauders, y'know? The rivalry thingie.
That would've been a good idea, probably. Especially since it's only a year until they start dating.
Aw, good :)

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